Saturday, December 28, 2013


The end line of FRUSTRATED-GIRL should read 'could not' and not 'couldn't'. I know this sounds, perhaps, silly, but it jars less, having used the word 'couldn't' only a couple of lines away. It flows better, lengthens the line, and balances the alliteration of P, B, and D. I'm sure I've made such slight errors elsewhere, but I do have the corrected verses other than on this blog. Cheers, mateys. Captain Mark.

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